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 Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)

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Caleb

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Number of posts : 37
Age : 25
Skill : 4375
Force Ability : 2100
Aim : N/A
Strength : 1900
Intelligence : 3150
Army : sith
Credits : 4100
Weapons : Double Bladed Lightsaber
Registration date : 2008-10-30

PostSubject: Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)   Fri Oct 31, 2008 12:38 pm

Caleb walked the streets of the city on iridonia, He looked around ..laughter.. He coughed and walked. The sounds around him not phasing his thought as he planned complicated plans in his head. Caleb walked and turned a corner. He withdrew his arm into his cloak and made sure his saber was there. He took his arm out the evilness of the city..the planet covering him in its sweet scent. his cloak its blackness enshrouded him, He walked across the street ...crush... ...crush... ...snap... He walked into a building and spun down a staircase. he walked out the back into a alleyway and then down a set of stairs. He looked at a set of doors as they slowly slid open. The dimly lit hallway was pleasing to him. He walked into a room with a desk and 1 computer on top of it in the back of the room is a closet, inside it was no equipment but a picture. He grabbed the picture and studied the man on it. He was young looking with brown hair. A folder with is bio in the next. Caleb laughed and spun on his heel turning around and walked out of the room. He walked out heard the clash of sabers. ..screams.. his thoughts drifted off to a distant day back when he still had his sanity before he ..changed..

9 Years ago


Caleb and blasm walked down the canyon pass away from the great sith temple which reside closer to the top. They slowly walked towards a secret Altar so they could pray to the sons of evil and the gods of darkness. As they rounded the corner to go to the altar they both stopped, Frozen in their tracks by the site before them. Caleb gaped as his eyes slowly looked to his left where his friend Vlaos lay. She was bleeding and mot likely dead even though her body twitched. He looked forward to which had stopped both Caleb and blasm in their tracks. Krotan another one of their friends and a Sith prodigy was held in the air by his neck holding him was a jedi, Krotan screamed as blood trickled from his mouth, Caleb knew he was barely alive and snapped back into reality. Blasm and Caleb drew their sabers and ran at the jedi. The jedi threw Krotan at Blasm but was caught, Caleb continued to rush the jedi and in a instant they locked blades. Fighting to gain control Caleb sent a knee upward to connect in the jedi's gut. The jedi jumped up and dodged it as he kicked Caleb in the face sending him backwards far. Blasm had already began his charge again. But he was no match for the jedi. He sliced vertically and the jedi kicked Blasm's saber away. Blasm looked upwards and his neck was cut by a saber slice. Caleb screamed and in his rage rushed the jedi slicing and cutting and stabbing wildly. The jedi supernatually blocked and ducked and parried each blow. Caleb stumbled back as the jedi let loose a flurry of attacks and he landed undefencesivilly. Caleb quickly recovered and swept the Jedi under his foot. But was quickly uppercutted away. He looked up as his vision dimmed and saw the jedi pick something up and walk away to his ship. ..Laughter..

Caleb Snapped back to his reality and looked around, He must have unconciouslly walked the right path as he was only steps away from where his target should soon be. Caleb sat against the wall and looked for his target, Stifiling a yawn he began to see him. The tall jedi walked forward and then stopped, The jedi spun on his heel and walked down a alleyway then through a door. Caleb silently followed him keepnig distance but making sure to be little noticed, The jedi then took off on a large sprint through more doors. Caleb followed just as fast keeping his distance but making sure to slowly catchup. After a little while of chasing the jedi through winding halls and doors. He arrived in a gymnasium. He glanced over it, The only thing he saw was a single toy in the middle of the gym but no jedi. He stood in front of the exit since it was the only one and scanned the roof of the gym. He looked and looked for minutes on end until he spotted him. It was only part of his cloak but good enough. Caleb used his force power to bend the bar the jedi was on and surely enough the jedi fell landing easily without harm. The jedi looked at caleb and said
"Who are you and why do you insist on chasing me"?
Caleb drew his lightsaber and said in calm but anxious voice.
"You carry info on the great sith I know this well, You are planning to hand it to the jedi, I cannot allow this and so you will die".
As the jedi was about to speak Caleb cut him off by slicing vertically at his shoulder to his right hip. The jedi jumped back and drew his lightsaber, Caleb ran at the jedi jumping side to side to avoid any jedi tricks. The jedi jumped up and spun coming down on Caleb with a hard slash, Caleb caught the slash with his own saber and brought his leg up under both saber's to kick the jedi in the stomach, It worked partly as the jedi took the kick but he was able to push Caleb back some feet. Caleb knew that this jedi must not be well trained or just be a rook as his fighting style was lacking. Caleb ran at the jedi and attacked by slashing upwards expecting the jedi to catch it, THe jedi did and as the were locked caleb released one hand from his saber and aimed a punch at the Jedi's temple, It worked and the jedi spun catching his balance the falling back from trauma to the brain. As the Jedi struggled on the ground attempting to get up Caleb walked over him and raised a fist, using much of his might he slammed it down cracknig the jedi's nose and knocking him unconscious. Caleb Grabbed the jedi by the cuff and dragged him along the ground while sheathing his saber. As he walked he made sure to press into the alleyway making sure to not be seen as any slight messup could screw the mission. ..Screams.. ..Yelling.. ..Blaster Rifle..

15 Years ago


Caleb regained his sight and began to ran the blaster fire around him searing the buildings. Caleb tripped and looked behind him his father firing away at the Slaver's that were making a fast advancment on their small outpost. Caleb crawled over to A nearby wall and grabbed the blaster rifle his mother had given him to defend himself. His father ran past him and picked him up by the collar. Caleb still stunned from the events did not notice when he was thrown against a wall. He snapped out of it and readied his rifle wide eyed and scared, He looked around the edge of the wall and saw the trandosians make their fast approach. Caleb shuddered and ran further back hiding behind A downed piece of wall he sat and as he sat there he heard there steps. Each crack sent shudder's down his back as they neared closer to him. His mother yelled and from the cover of downed walls and flip metal tables, They and 10 others rose and fired. The front Trandosians Spun from the rounds and then fell as the other's took cover behind rubble. The fire went on for a good time, Caleb fired at the tran closest to him. He hit the side of its helmet and it shield's Reflected them as he fired more the tran turned only to have his shield broken and the rounds break into his skull spewing out his blood, Caleb ducked and panted as he heard more gunfire. He looked to his right and saw A man hit the floor dead his whole left side shredded from ammo, He heard people yell as a raging torrent of gunfire and a loud whirring noise as a huge trandosian with a turret walked through, Caleb looked at it and shocked his father and mother yell to him and he instinctivly ran to them going through a metal door to some safety. He heard screaming and as the turret passed the door so did blood and boy parts. Caleb was thrown into a vehicle and as his parents got in and drove away he started to see the Sith temple, He wondered why they werent protecting the village, Before he could think anymore the vehicle was hit by a mortar and flipped over. He crawled out and saw his parents firing their rifles. He began to ran towards the temple ditching his rifle, He looked back and saw his mother get hit by a blast in the rib and fall. She coughed up blood and reached a hand towards him as a turret wiped his parents out in a flurry of ammo. Caleb screamed but felt a arm grab him and a fist hit his head and then blacked out only to awake inside the sith temple A dark robe and a letter next to him. ..Screams..

The jedi Caleb had captured awoken in a large room with chains attached to hooks hung from the ceiling and several other bodies lay. The jedi Heard a Voice and come through speakers in the top corners of the walls. He checked himself and saw he had been stripped of his weapon, He looked over to a Glass case and inside was a vibrosword, While he looked the voice had said
"Hello jedi, This is your punishment for treason against the sith empire and attempt at killing a sith, But you will get a chance, In secret entrances located about this base are keys, You must collect 2 Keys to escape, After you escape you must fight me and you know what you win if you beat me already so good luck jedi." Calebs voice disappeared and the jedi looked around searching for the room, While Caleb sat in his arena watching the jedi pound on walls to see if they were hollow. As Caleb expected the jedi broke the glass at his own pain and took the sword, as the jedi touched it a Hint was given to him and The jedi stabbed the wall 12 degrees to his right. The wall shook then crumbled and Caleb let out a large laugh as the beast inside jumped on the jedi and bit into his arm missing a vein narrowly. The jedi screamed but stabbed the beast in the hwead, As the beast was already it died quickly, Blood flew from the jedis arm and he held it tightly while he searched the small room for the key, He found it and ran out as he heard the next hint and he stabbed the next room as the wall crumbled the jedi walked in and Caleb looked over to the next room. The jedi looked around and plasma charges Stuck to each wall lined it. The jedi walked forward and looked at the key in the middle of the room. As the Jedi raced for it A charge went off and part of the ceiling collapsed cutting the jedis arleady hurt arm, The jedi screamed but broke the glass and grabbed the key. A timer went up and 5 seconds appeared. The Jedi stumbled to the exit but was to late and felt his arm burn and himself lurch forward as the plasma went off. He looked at hsi arm the burnt skin sizziling from the charge and he put the keys in the locks as he felt himself ready to cry. As the door opened and the jedi saw Caleb sitting in a chair he swung the vibroblade ready to fight and Caleb stood Drawing his Light Saber from its sheathe. As he lit it and the red glow came he parried the vibroblade and remembered his trainning days ..Yelling.. Pages flipping..

12 years ago

Caleb yawned and strechted in his chair as he read the history of the sith for his history exam, He tipped back the chair and looked up as Blasm threw the chair down, Caleb whinced as he hit the floor and yelled at blasm "Jerk, What was that for?"Blasm laughed and said "Studying heh?" Caleb picked himself and the chair up and nodded, Then blasm grabbed his arm and drug him to the direction of the training room while he said "Today is our fighting test, Dont you remember." Caled let loose a sigh and when he entered the room his sensei was standing waiting for him to go next, Caleb took a Stance for A defensive look, As his sensei ran to the side caleb spun drawing his lightsaber and clashing with his sensei, They held in a draw until he jumped and threw it at his sensei while he ran to the side. His sensei caught the saber and appeared next to him punching him in the chest. Caleb winced and fell to the ground in defeat his sensei then said "Be glad you lasted a bit longer then your peers" Caleb in pain stumbled of to his station and took his test on sith history, He had to list the previous school masters to the current and their acheivements, As Caleb left his room he saw Toak A bully who was coming straight for him, Caleb walked back into his room but Toak cornered him in their, Caleb threw a punch but it was caught and the ogre of a boy toakgrabbed him by the throat and lifted him into the air. With one hand Caleb grabbed the giants wrist and with the other he reached for his saber, As the giant slowly choked he suddenly threw Caleb into a wall, As caleb hit the wall he spit up some blood and drew his Saber only to meet blades with the giatn, Toak knocked away caleb's saber and slashed at him with inhuman power, Caleb ducked and slashed at toak's heels. Toak screamed as he fell back his legs immobile. Caleb got up and yelled "Damn giant" Toak screamed again as Caleb stabbed into his heart killing the giant as caleb backed up panting from the exhausting fight his vision went red and saw that Toak had hit him in the stomach he blacked out and fell back ...Slash...

Caleb Jumped back dodging most of the vibrosword as he looked at his robes arm the cloth cut and some of his blood spilling out. Caleb cursed himself and clashed with the vibrosword again, Caleb panted and pushed the jedi back while he rushed forward again stabbing the jedi in the side, The jedi yelled in pain as he reared back and slashed at caleb only to be blocked and punched in the gut. As the jedi fell to a knee Caleb kicked him in the forehead and the jedi flew back into a wall. The jedi tried to use the force against caleb but was turned around and hit with it, As the jedi tried to get up Caleb slashed at him again, The jedi blocked the saber but not the next paralyzing kick to the chest. As the jedi lay dieing the only thing he saw was Caleb sheathe his saber and draw a dagger before he layed his head back. Caleb injected into the jedi hormones to keep him awake and active so he wouldnt fall unconcoius during his most brutal death. Caleb said to the jedi as he spun the dagger. "You know if only you hadnt done it, we wouldnt be here right now. you me my dagger, but this is your Strafe des Verrats So take what you reap."
As caleb said that he grabbed the jedi's wrist and cut around it deep enough into the muscle. As the jedi screamed in pain unable to fall unconcious Caleb cut both wrists all the way around. After he did this he grabbed the skin of both wrists and tore it off the jedi. the hands now bare of skin and blood pouring from the jedi spilt onto the ground. Caleb laughed and noticed one thing he had not before on the jedis bare wrist was a wire, Caleb instantly realized what this was and slit the jedis throat then ran out of the room only to feel his back be burned by the plasma inside the jedi. He cursed loud and long but then cleaned himself and left the building his work was over, and as a token of the jedi he kept the saber the jedi had carried on him and put it in his robe


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Skill : 37,780
Force Ability : 12,715
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Strength : 24,285
Intelligence : 13,545
Army : Sith Order
Master/Apprentice : None
Credits : 395
Weapons : Linked Fiber Cord Saber- Yellow
Registration date : 2008-10-21

PostSubject: Re: Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)   Sat Nov 15, 2008 11:57 pm

Punishment of Treason.... Good use of German. Please finish soon, I plan to reward you very nicely for this.

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PostSubject: Re: Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)   Tue Nov 18, 2008 3:44 am

I like the Saw Aspect. Please continue, I cannot wait to boost your stats.

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Number of posts : 37
Age : 25
Skill : 4375
Force Ability : 2100
Aim : N/A
Strength : 1900
Intelligence : 3150
Army : sith
Credits : 4100
Weapons : Double Bladed Lightsaber
Registration date : 2008-10-30

PostSubject: Re: Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)   Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:49 am

Done!
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PostSubject: Re: Strafe des Verrats (DONE!!)   Tue Nov 18, 2008 4:58 am

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Skill: 2400
Strength: 1800
Force Ability: 1800
Intelligence: 1200
Credits: 7500

Good job. Beautiful use of German.

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